how do u like my song so far?

i'm not finished but this is the second song iv'e ever written so how
do u like it so far?

Chorus:
Wake me up from this horrible nightmare,
take me out of this terrible dream,
i wish that i could just dissapear,
get out of this wreched world..

Verse 1:
please take me out of here,
this is a nightmare,
and i wish i could run,
but when i try to run,
i go in circles
i just cant take it,
anymore...